Firstly, I won’t ever be applying for a job at a legal center. The office politics in the story is bitchy and nasty, and ultimately fatal. You did a really good job of representing the bullying, it drew me in and it was a big shock when it was revealed what was really behind it all.
Maria’s response to the bullying seemed very real. I liked Maria’s character, she is well-meaning, but flawed. She’s unsure of herself, but she knows that and hides it with her sense of humor.
I loved Josephine, she is a great character. I loved her sassiness and her near-racist attitude to Dirk.